Editing The News

November 17th, 2009

OF THESE THREE, PICK 2 TO COMPLETE

WINNIPEG – The Winnipeg Blue Bombers weren’t the only ones with their hands full during Sunday’s season-ending loss at Canad Inns Stadium. Winnipeg police report that one of their on-duty officers was assaulted in the stands while removing an intoxicated fan from the stands, and several others officers who assisted were showered with beer. The incident happened at about 2:20 p.m. of a game that started at noon. Police said an officer was attempting to remove the intoxicated fan when a man seated beside the drunk tried to intervene and a second officer moved to assist.  A struggle ensued with the intoxicated fan before a middle-aged man — who was described as being dressed like Hulk Hogan — could be wrestled from his seat.The beer was tossed at police officers who responded to assist. During the melee, one officer and a fan fell down about 12 stairs, It was while officers were walking the drunk out of the area, police say, that a third man struck an officer several times in the back of the head. William Cody McGimpsey, 24, of Winnipeg has been charged with assaulting a police officer. A 52-year-old man was taken into custody under the Intoxicated Persons  Act.

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The Winnipeg Police Service is already following most of the recommendations of B.C.’s Braidwood Inquiry into taser use, city councillors were told this morning. Earlier this year, Winnipeg’s police were asked to respond to 19 recommendations made by the Braidwood Inquiry, which issued a report following its examination of the death of Polish airport visitor Robert Dziekanski following multiple taser discharges by RCMP officers. Const. Hank Bergen, a Winnipeg police use-of-force expert, appeared before council’s protection and community services committee to dissect all 19 Braidwood recommendations and said most but not all are already followed by a police service that’s highly trained in protocols governing taser use. That said, recommendations to only use tasers to enforce criminal-code offences or when officers are certain bodily harm will take place will not be implemented, Bergen said, because police need to have all enforcement options at their disposal and could place themselves or others in danger if they stop and consider too many variables in emergency situations. Another recommendation — to stop deploying taser probes on police trainees during testing — was put into place several months ago, police Chief Keith McCaskill said. Trainees are now zapped in stun-drive mode — that is, without the projectile probes — instead. Yet another recommendation to place defibrillators in all police vehicles may not be feasible, but Winnipeg’s police will explore the idea anyway because the devices could prove useful in a variety of medical situations, McCaskill said.

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Police are again warning people to be careful when they meet their Internet friends in person after a group of people was assaulted and robbed in Winnipeg early Saturday. Police are investigating whether the suspects planned the hold-up. The suspects were invited to the home in the 200 block of Clyde Road in East Elmwood by its occupants, who they recently met over a social-networking website. This situation is a bit different because one of the victims met one of the suspects in person in the past through a mutual friend, police said. When the suspects arrived around 3:30 a.m., they allegedly assaulted and stole belongings from the residents — two males, aged 21 and 25, and a 25-year-old woman, who are roommates, police said. One of the victims was cut by a knife-wielding male, police said. The victims didn’t require medical attention, police said. No one has been arrested. The suspects are three males and a female, police said.

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Big Thought #13

November 17th, 2009

Who has more power - the media who creates the news, or the public who read the news? Answer in three well-thought out sentences.

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Big Thought #12

November 9th, 2009

Since it is Rememberance Day this week, here is this thought.

In “In Flander’s Fields” John McCrae writes that we should “take up our quarrel with the foe.” If one of the purposes of Rememberance Day is to never have war again, do you think it is okay to “take up the quarrel”? Answer thoughtfully in at least three sentences.

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November 8th, 2009

For those of you who may forget, the news article assignment is due on Wednesday.

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Major News/Interview Project

November 6th, 2009

We Came, We Interviewed, We Conquered (and wrote a news article)

You watched some interviews, you did some practice interviewing, you looked at how to ask good questions, you looked closely at news articles and now you will combine all of those skills in this assignment.

You are to do an interview with someone else and use answers from that interview in a news article. The interview questions you use can be from your practice interview, but they must follow the three rules of good questions:

1.       Good questions are specific

2.       Good questions probe inquiry (you have a particular kind of answer in mind)

3.       Good questions are answerable

If your practice questions do not use this format, then you will need to ask new questions that follow these guidelines. You should have at least FIVE questions that you ask, but will maybe only use TWO of them in your news article

The added part to this is that you will write a news article. Remember that you have studied the structure of a news article (5Ws in the first paragraph, etc). The news article can be real (something that has happened in the area, for example) or fake (something you make up or predict) – it doesn’t matter what the story or questions are; what I am concerned about is how well you can use questioning format and news article format. You will insert the questions you asked into your news article, and will get marks for a seemless insertion of a quote. For example:

It’s a Rubik’s cube for sure,” Selinger said of picking a cabinet. “There’s lots of complexities and issues you have to deal with.

Proper News Article Structure (5Ws at the beginning, Secondary Info, Tertiary Info, Background Info)
                                …./10
Proper Questioning Strategy (3 Rules)
                             …./10
5 Questions Prepared
                             …./5
Proper Insertion of Quotes
                             …./5
TOTAL                 …./30

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Big Thoughts 11

November 6th, 2009

 View this link, and respond to the image.

Respond.

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November 2nd, 2009

Good Questions are Specific
Okay Q. What will happen in climate change?
Good Q. How will climate change affect my life as I live in Winnipeg?

 

Make these into more specific questions:

1. What do you think about waiting outside for lunch?

2.  Do you think that world hunger is bad?

 

Good Questions Probe Inquiry/The Interviewee
Okay Q. What can you tell me about climate change?
Good Q. What specific factors are involved in making climate change worse?

Make these questions have an inquiry focus:
1. How do you feel about River Heights?
2. What do you think about homelessness?

Good Questions are Answerable
(example: interviewing a student)

Bad Q. When speaking about the historical context of sociocultural problems faced by the minority populations of Canada, which endeavours by the hegemony do you believe are have been most destabilizing?
Good Q. Please identify some ways that you have seen people in Canada treated unfairly.


For these topics, make questions that are easy to answer:
1. The meaning of life.
2. A way to solve the problem of poverty.

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Article Analysis

October 27th, 2009

Just a reminder for everyone that the fact-based article analysis (the assignment that was given when the sub was here) is due on THURSDAY. Remember to do BOTH sides of the sheet (one story per side). Because I can’t post that particular assignment here, if you have any questions please see me as soon as possible.

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Big Thought #10

October 27th, 2009

The media is sometimes a big and confusing topic. Write down two questions that you or someone else may have about the media. Don’t simply ask questions like “Do you like the media?”

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Big Thoughts 8 and 9

October 22nd, 2009

Big Thought #8

A Canadian professor famously wrote that “The medium is the message.” Remember that a medium is a way of transmitting information (like TV,radio or the internet). What did he mean by this quote? Explain in at least 3 sentences.

Big Thought #9

What is the worst part of all media? Explain in at least two sentences.

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